Web Copy
That Sells -- The
Secret to Creating Profitable Websites
by Maria
Veloso,
Author of Web Copy That Sells
"Maria
Veloso is certainly a world-class copywriter. When it
comes to direct-response web copy, she is -- hands-down -- the best.
She wrote the web copy for my Boot Camp, and all I could say was -- Wow! Fabulous! Amazing! Sign
me up!"
-- Jay Conrad Levinson, author of
the world's best-selling series of business books titled Guerrilla Marketing
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What
is the biggest challenge of online businesses?
According to a recent independent survey of more than 10,000 "net-repreneurs,"
the challenge is this: Their websites are not generating enough customers
-- and consequently, there aren't enough sales and profits.
It's
not surprising, therefore, that according to some industry estimates, 95% of
websites are not making money. (At least, not as much money as they'd
like to make.)
Let me ask you a question: Is your own website as profitable as
you'd like it to be?
If your answer is No, what is the reason for its lackluster profits?
If you're like most online businesses, you've spent a bundle putting up your
website, submitting it to search engines, and promoting it
like crazy -- but the good times have yet to start rolling in. You're
puzzled because you've heard that
hundreds of millions of people are surfing the Internet, and yet your website hasn't gotten its share of the
billions of dollars that are
changing hands on the Web.
You're stumped!
Why do some online businesses make money so easily on the Web, while you try
everything possible and still barely scrape by?
Here's the answer:
More often than not, the single most important ingredient in creating a
profitable website is missing.
That ingredient is ... web
copy that sells.
"Words
-- not numbers
--
are the true currency of business."
--
Ted Nicholas, self-made
millionaire who sold $400 million worth of products through the sheer
power of ad copy
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Words are the true
currency of the Web as well.
Nothing happens until someone writes the words that get people to
click, sign up, read, register, order, subscribe,
or buy whatever you're selling.
Let me ask you a question:
If I could show you a way that you can use words to convert 15% or more of your web
visitors into cash-paying customers, and turn your website into a
powerful machine that automatically
generates leads, customers, sales
and profits for you --
are you willing to spend the next 7 minutes to learn it?
If you answered Yes, then I urge you to read every word on this page.
This could be the most valuable article you'll ever read concerning the
profits of your online business.
The Deadliest Mistake
Most Online Businesses Make
When I visited a bookstore recently, I noticed something peculiar.
There were bookshelves literally overflowing with books on web
development, programming, web authoring and web design. But there wasn't a
single
book on how to write for the Web -- nor one on how to
write web copy that sells.
Can you figure out why?
One reason is that many business owners do not understand the importance of web
content to the success of a website -- and therefore, a demand for
such books has never been created. In fact, when it comes to building
websites, most business owners either:
Big mistake!
Web designers and Webmasters are not copywriters. Neither can
brochures be recycled as web copy. Period. (More on this later.)
Web designers and Webmasters may be skilled at writing code or creating stunning graphics. But copywriting is an art
and a science that's best left in the hands of trained and experienced
copywriters who truly understand the craft.
Just because someone is a decent writer for the offline markets doesn't mean his writing
skills can translate into effective Web writing. Even some of the best copywriters
for the offline markets are not necessarily adept at
writing effective copy for the Web.
You see, the Web has a culture all its own. It has its own mindset, its own psychology
-- even it's own language, so to speak.
"Did
you know that compelling ad copy on your website can actually kill
your sales?"
Why?
Because people online do not want to get sold. This is a proven
fact documented by a recent study conducted by John
Morkes and Jakob Nielsen. If web visitors ever do get "sold"
on something, they first want to be finessed -- not bombarded by
blatant advertising.
Therefore, writing web copy that sells requires some adroit
maneuvering.
If you sell a weight loss product, and have a website headline that
says something like...
"At Last -- You Can Wash Away Years of Built-Up
Fat"
...the web visitor's "radar" picks up on the commercial
nature of the message, and immediately knows you're going to try to
sell him something. His defenses go way up.
And since your headline has an obvious commercial message, whatever
you say in the rest of your copy would be suspect -- and not
believable -- because you positioned yourself as a merchant instead
of an information provider.
The ironic thing is that the above headline may work quite well
in direct mail -- but not on the Internet.
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Writing web copy
that sells involves a deep understanding of the Internet population, but to
simplify things for you, I've boiled the craft down to 3 fundamental rules.
Rule No. 1: Don't make your website look like an ad.
On an average day, each one of us is bombarded with 3,500 commercial messages
-- from TV, billboards, radio, the Internet and practically everywhere we
turn. The last thing we want to see when we land on a website is yet
another ad.
Yet it amazes me to see how many online businesses go out of their way to make
their websites look like ads, billboards or other commercial
messages.
And then there are those who insist on copying, cloning or borrowing the
elements of successful ads from the past, and adapting them to their product. Now, on the
Internet, that's like shooting yourself in the foot. As Joe Sugarman,
legendary direct marketer, once said, "When you copy, you fail."
This is not to say that you shouldn't model successful people -- or websites,
for that matter. It simply means that when you indiscriminately copy the
writing styles from another medium, another genre, or another era, you really
aren't harmonizing with the unique medium that is the Internet.
Your website should provide bona fide information that your prospect is looking
for. The information should have an editorial feel to it -- and above
all, should be free of hype.
According to the research study by John
Morkes and Jakob Nielsen, Internet users detest "marketese" or
self-promoting language steeped with pompous, exaggerated and
unsubstantiated claims (e.g., "the world's best") that is so
prevalent on the Web. They want solid content and factual
information.
But where does the selling come in, you ask?
Read on, and I'll reveal the adroit maneuvering strategy that works so
well on the Internet.
"Maria
Veloso really understands how to write copy that sells on the Web.
I give her high marks for understanding the buyer's mindset,
understanding the product, and presenting benefits in a way that
compels prospects to take action."
--
David Garfinkel, Author, "Advertising Headlines That Make You
Rich" http://www.adheadlines.com
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Rule No. 2:
Stop them dead in their tracks.
Online
business owners spend a lot of time and money trying to get traffic to their
websites. Building web traffic is very important, but it won't mean
a thing unless you do one thing
first. That is, create compelling web copy that will stop them dead
in their tracks, and get them to do what you want them to do when
they do get to your site.
In order for words to wield their magical power on the Web, they have to be tailored specifically for the information-flooded Internet
public where attention span is a rare commodity -- what with about 36
million websites clamoring for attention, not to mention more than 2
billion pages of content!
FACT: If your website
is little more than an online brochure for your business, then your website
is a very weak selling tool.
You simply can't expect to win your web visitors' hearts -- and their business
-- if your site says something passive like:
"Welcome to the [company name]
website, makers of [product]. Here are our products [photo images and
blurbs]. Click here to order."
In order to be fully functional, your website needs to incorporate salesmanship
in print. This is how you leverage your website into unstoppable
sales activity. If your website's purpose is to sell, you have to
transform it into the best possible cyber-salesperson you can make
it.
You must pierce your web visitor with the needle-spray of compelling content
-- expertly crafted for hidden selling. In plain English, this
simply means: Develop irresistible content that slides smoothly into a
covert "sales pitch" for your product. This is the
"finessing" that net surfers are more often receptive to.
It bears repeating that your "sales pitch" shouldn't sound like an
ad, but rather read like an editorial, testimonial, advice, case study,
or endorsement. If you want an example of this kind of writing in
the brick-and-mortar (i.e., offline) world, think advertorial or press release.
This style gives your website an aura of credibility -- often referred to as
the "halo effect." The operative word here is...
... verisimilitude.
What is verisimilitude? It's not necessarily truth -- but rather, it's the
appearance of truth.
When you wrap your advertising message within the soft cushions of a good
editorial piece, you position yourself as an expert. What's more,
you get to be the good guy who gives valuable information, not the slick
"hype-ster" who's out to pry dollars out of people's wallets.
This kind of cyber-journalism -- sometimes referred to as editorial
marketing -- is the new profit-building model for the most
successful websites on the Internet.
Real estate agents, dentists, jewelers, authors, and all kinds of businesses that have
an online presence have embraced this profit-building model with great
success. Even lawyers, accountants and cosmetic surgeons are discovering
that this is the surefire way to go.
"When
it comes to increasing the pulling power of any Website,
there's only one copywriting secret I turn to most --
"RESEARCH". And when it comes to doing the research
necessary to writing winning Website copy, Maria Veloso's diligence
and resourcefulness are unsurpassed.
"Her copy is hypnotic and irresistible simply
because she does her homework and knows her target markets better than
anyone else. No wonder she outpulls other copywriters
time after time. Maria is definitely one of the best-kept
copywriting secrets on the Net. If you can afford her, hire
her!"
-- Alex Mandossian,
Managing Director, Heritage Publishing House and publisher of Market
with Postcards (tm) and The Marketing Minute E-Gram (tm)
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Rule No. 3:
Capture their contact information.
Because of the recent dot-com shakeout, online businesses are learning the hard way that for a
website to succeed, it must have effective direct-response web copy
that induces action from a single exposure.
Just think. What's the point in
getting
someone to come to your website if the site visit doesn't generate a response of
some kind -- like picking up the phone and calling your business, subscribing
to your newsletter, signing up for your mailing list, or buying
your product or service?
"Generating a response" on the Web means more than impressing web
visitors with cool graphics or technology, or getting them to bookmark your site.
Studies show that less than 1% of Internet users
actually return to sites they've bookmarked. What good could that
possibly do you?
And what's the point in having cutting-edge web design, eye-popping graphics and a sophisticated e-commerce infrastructure if you are unable to
entice your web visitors long enough for them to do what you
want them to do?
"Maria
Veloso was one of my best copywriting students ever. When
she submitted a 6-page sales letter that pulled in $18,000 in 2
days, I was convinced she was a killer copywriter."
-- Mark Joyner, CEO of Aesop.com, and widely recognized as the 'Tiger
Woods of Internet Marketing'
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If you have
something to sell on your website, chances are, less than 1% of your web
visitors will ever buy your product. Even the best marketers with the
most successful websites seldom convert more than 5% of their web
visitors into customers.
What happens to the 95% of your web visitors who came and went?
For most websites, nothing. Those prospects are gone for good -- never to
return.
That's why it's absolutely essential for your website to have an opt-in
mechanism. Develop an irresistible -- and easy -- way
for your web visitors to give you at least their e-mail address.
The odds are against you that people will buy from you the first time they
visit your website -- because they don't even know you. So rather than lose them
altogether, ask for something that is easier for them to do than
pulling out their credit card -- such as give you
their e-mail address. This is the past of least resistance.
Naturally, in order to compel them to give you their e-mail address, you
need to provide a benefit that gives them instant gratification.
You can do this by having them sign up to receive a free report (with an
irresistible title), a free newsletter, a free
course, free product, free chapters of your book, or other offer which requires
no financial commitment on their part.
Why?
Because when you offer to give them something of value without making
them jump through hoops, they would more readily give you their e-mail
address.
Naturally, you need to craft your copy to present the opt-in "offer"
in the most compelling way possible -- so as to capture the contact
information on 50%, 75% -- even 100% of your visitors. Make it the
primary goal of your website to at least capture your web visitors'
e-mail addresses -- instead of letting them "get away" and wasting
all the time, money and effort it took to get them to your website.
Capturing contact information is so fundamental to the success of any
business enterprise. I can't over-emphasize the fact that crafting
your opt-in offer is infinitely more important than crafting the offer for your
primary product.
Here's why: After you capture your web visitors' e-mail address (and
preferably their name, address, preferences and other pertinent information)
into your database, you can start a relationship with those prospects that will
line your pockets with cash -- for life.
The major lesson you need to take with you is that if your website's primary
goal is to make that front-end sale, you are missing out on 90% or more
of the potential profits of your business. The real trick is in building
your database.
Relationship marketing is at the very heart of all e-commerce. You've
probably heard of the popular Web truism, "The money is in the
list." When you leverage
your relationship with the prospects in your database (i.e., your
"list"), that's when real selling actually starts. That's also
when you can start tapping into the joint venture goldmine that Internet
marketers never stop talking about. So even if your website gets only modest
traffic, you can convert that traffic into more money than you can imagine.
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Maria Veloso is widely acknowledged as the leading expert in web
copywriting and web traffic conversion. She is also the Director of Web
Copywriting University, and the author of
Web
Copy That Sells: The Secret to Creating a Profitable Website
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Is your website ready for the flood of customers, sales and profits
that expertly crafted web copy can bring? When do you want
your website to be one of the top 5% of websites that make serious money on the
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"Good
Lord,
you are a great copywriter! Your copy made me want to
sign up for my own class!"
-- Joe Vitale, author of "Hypnotic
Writing" and other best-selling books and courses marketed by
Nightingale-Conant
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